viernes, 20 de enero de 2012

HOMEWORK ONLINE, II...(a writing exercise for the students in 3º A,B,C)

[For reference, see Student's book, page 42, exercises 2-3]

A MEMORABLE EXPERIENCE
Think of something funny, exciting, terrifying, mysterious, embarrassing... which happened to you, and write a blog entry about that experience (You can also imagine it).
Use the writing model in exercise 2 ('My dream comes true') as a guide, and add one or two sentences explaining why the experience was important to you or how it changed your life.
Complete your text keeping these points in mind:
a) What happened
b) When
c) Where
d) Who was/were there
e) Your feelings.
[Click on 'Comentarios' and leave your writings there. Do not forget to state your name and class group]

11 comentarios:

Anónimo dijo...

MARIO CASAS AND PITY ARE MY FRIENDS.
I was with Lucia Ros in Vialia last summer when suddenly we saw two celebrities. They were Mario Casas and Pity. We took photos and we asked them an autograph. They smiled and they invited us to watch the next film with all the actors. We were so excited! Now they are our friends and we are going to the next festival with them. We have always wanted to meet Mario Casas and Pity. Now our dream is coming true. The experience was important and we felt emotion.

LIDIA MUÑOZ SÁNCHEZ 3ºB

Anónimo dijo...

One day, when I was with my aunt, my uncle and my sister in Guadalmar.Before dinner mi aunt said my sister to go the supermarket for bread. I went with my sister but on returning my sister and me confused the door and we scared and we cried. My aunt saw that didn't arrive and came for us. I haven't gone back alone the supermarket since day

Paula Pérez Bravo 3ºB

Anónimo dijo...

Last Friday, i went to german cours with Maria Salinas.We were late, so i catched the first bus that we saw. Later Maria Salinas told me that we were in a strange place, we got off and saw that this was a wrong bus.

MARIA MERIDA ALBA 3ºA

Anónimo dijo...

The other,I went to the language school in bike with Miguel Angel and Zoilo, when suddenly,Miguel Angel, was going very quickly and he went to do a skid when he fell to the ground and Zoilo and I were laughting for a long time.
PABLO AGUILAR PÉREZ 3ºA

Anónimo dijo...

I was in Sierra Nevada with my father and sisters. In 2010 my sister and I went to learn to ski. We had a monitor. My sister was the one that wanted to begin, this way that took the skis and threw to ski. She was shocked against a tree. One damaged it. I was scared because my sister there was the fallen one in the snow and I thought that it had happened to him slightly badly.
ANGEL BUENO CABRERA 3ºC

Prof. CARLOS dijo...

Some corrections to...

a) ...LIDIA MUÑOZ:
We asked them for an autograph / It was a great experience and we were thrilled (with emotion)

b) ...PAULA PÉREZ:
My aunt told my sister to go to the supermarket to get some bread / On our way back, we were mistaken and got frightened / I haven't gone back alone to the supermarket since that day

c) ...MARÍA MÉRIDA
I went to a German course / we were late so we caught the first bus that we saw

Anónimo dijo...

some time ago I passed something I will never forget.
I was visiting my grandmother's House and when I was at a dinner suddenly heard screaming in the building.
There was a fire!
We had to run the House and inform all neighbors
In the end only it was a shock but I will never forget that day
MARÍA DEL MAR CHANETA 3 º A

Rosa Iris Antonio dijo...

One summer, my sister and I went to Cazorla with my cousins to a cottage. One day we walking with my little cousin Aitor,and suddenly he was stung by one poisonous snake in his hand. Quickly my uncle had to take him to the Hospital in Jaén.
He was very seriously ill, but fortunately he could to cure.

Maria Saalinas dijo...

three years ago, I was with my family in a hotel, because it was summer holiday.One night we decided to go to a village next to the hotel.It was too late and we returned to our hotel, , I was so tired and I slept in the car. Suddenly I heard a noise, I saw a light and then ... craash! a motorbike hit the car, my family and I, got out to the car. I was very very frightened. Fortunately, there weren't any injured.
by María Salinas Periago 3ªA

Prof. CARLOS dijo...

Some corrections to...

a) ...PABLO AGUILAR:
The other day, I rode my bike to the Languages School / Miguel Ángel was cycling very fast / He tried to do a skid

b) ...ÁNGEL BUENO
My sister and I tried to learn how to ski / ...so she put the skis on and started off / she crashed into a tree and she got hurt / I was afraid for my sister because she was there fallen on the snow and I thought that something bad had happened to her

c) ...Mª DEL MAR CHANETA
Some time ago, something happened to me which I will never forget / Suddenly I heard somebody screaming in the building while I was having dinner / We had to rush and tell all the neighbors (about the fire) / It was only a shock in the end

d) ...ROSA Mº CHANETA
My sister and I went to a cottage in Cazorla with my cousins / One day we were walking with my little cousin Aitor when suddenly he was stung in his hand by a poisonous snake / fortunately he could cure the injury

e) ...MARÍA SALINAS
I fell asleep in the car / My family and I got (rushed) out of the car.

Prof. CARLOS dijo...

Four students in 3º A and ten students from 3º B gave me their exercise in handwriting.